Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Word Choice - Kensuke

Find a brilliant example of word choice in this week’s text!  Look for examples of the author "showing - not telling" by using sensory details within their writing.
Write the entire sentence and explain why you chose it.  Please include page number.

Example:  

"Bob’s face went ashen. His breathing came in ragged gasps." p.36

2 comments:

  1. I could relate to Bob because I have seen someone look ashen after they had a fright. The text really helped me to visualize what the character was experiencing.

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  2. It had puncture holes & it was damp but we could still read enough. P.g.5 paragraph2 sentence2

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