Find a brilliant example of word choice in this week’s text! Look for examples of the author "showing - not telling" by using sensory details within their writing.
Write the entire sentence and explain why you chose it. Please include page number.
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"Bob’s face went ashen. His breathing came in ragged gasps." p.36
"Despereaux marveled his own bravery. He admired his own defiance." p.56 I like the words.
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DeleteAnd then, reader, he fainted.(LOL!!!)
DeleteThe marks on the pages, the "squiggles" as Merlot referred to them, arranged themselves into shapes. the shapes arranged themselves into words, and the words spelled out a delicious and wonderful phrase : Once upon a time. pg.22 chapter 3. I can relate to Merlot because I reffer things like that to.
ReplyDelete"The mice seemed to be one angry body with hundreds of tails and thousands of whiskers and one huge, hungry mouth opening and closing and opening and closing , saying over and over "To the dungeon, to the dungeon, to the dungeon. " " p.56, chapter 10. I chose this because I can really picture the huge mob of mice, surging at him like a tide.
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