Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Word Choice - Tollbooth

Find a brilliant example of word choice in this week’s text!  Look for examples of the author "showing - not telling" by using sensory details within their writing.
Write the entire sentence and explain why you chose it.  Please include page number.

Example:  

"Bob’s face went ashen. His breathing came in ragged gasps." p.36
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 4, 2015 at 10:54 AM

    There seemed to be no end to the bustle and activity.Pg.47

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 4, 2015 at 10:59 AM

    I chose this because it is a sensory detail.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2015 at 9:08 PM

    there seemed to be no end to the bustle and activity was ours too.on page 47

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2015 at 6:40 PM

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  5. AnonymousMarch 4, 2015 at 4:51 PM

    pg.16-17.
    The flowers shone as if they'd been cleaned and polished,and the trees that lined the road shimmered silvery green.

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